http://www.inthegorge.com/realty-executives/help-please-help-me-proofread-my-paper Sat, 07 Jan 2012 07:51:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.inthegorge.com/realty-executives/help-please-help-me-proofread-my-paper/comment-page-1#comment-136 gufyblnd1 Sun, 24 Jan 2010 09:45:59 +0000 http://www.inthegorge.com/realty-executives/help-please-help-me-proofread-my-paper#comment-136 Good paper. If you are looking for grammar and punctuation here goes...1.board of directors COMPRISED of financial contributors. 2. Serious conflict OF interest- 3. particularly the chairman of the board, use comma after 4. corruption, negligence, and nepotism use comma 5. personal, social, and professional 6.leaking, no capital letter 7.moral values and WHISTLE blowing- you forgot the LE 8.safest option WOULD HAVE BEEN, not would be 9.blew the whistle for A different reason 10.results may be. Use period at end of sentence. These are in the order I found them. Hope this helped. Good Luck. Well done!<br><b>References : </b><br> Good paper. If you are looking for grammar and punctuation here goes…1.board of directors COMPRISED of financial contributors.
2. Serious conflict OF interest-
3. particularly the chairman of the board, use comma after
4. corruption, negligence, and nepotism use comma
5. personal, social, and professional
6.leaking, no capital letter
7.moral values and WHISTLE blowing- you forgot the LE
8.safest option WOULD HAVE BEEN, not would be
9.blew the whistle for A different reason
10.results may be. Use period at end of sentence.
These are in the order I found them. Hope this helped. Good Luck. Well done!
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